Hands-on editing

I’ve been feeling pretty crappy the past few days, and apprently it’s that time of year, because my bud Fal has felt the same way, and she’s way up there in Illinois. I’m on the upswing, though, and I hope she is, too.

I love September. The word is nice, the birthstone is sapphire, the weather is cooler, the kids are firmly in school, football starts…There’s nothing to dislike about September. Well, we do have FOUR family birthdays in September–mine, my husband’s, my son’s, and my step-son’s–on top of the back-to-school expense, auto insurance is due and Christmas is just around the corner…So yeah, financially it’s usually pretty stressful in September. I haven’t had a birthday present in years. If I had the money I’d probably have to buy my present myself, anyway.

But still…September is nice. Energizing. Full of possibility.

I think I’m going to try a technique with my novel that I used for the long synopsis. For the synopsis, I wrote and typed everything out, then I cut apart the scenes and rearranged them into the best order. It’s one of those things I’ve tried before according to someone else’s instructions with no success, but once I threw out my internal rule book and played it by ear, it worked out well. With the novel I’ve tried notecards, but writing a hundred notecards and deciding which information is important enough to go on each notecard was just too unwieldy, so I decided I wasn’t an organizer after all. But again, I had fallen into the trap lots of writers fall into–the “should” trap, the “rules” trap, the “everybody knows better than I do” trap.

So I’m going to make up this technique as I go along. I’ll print out the whole book–backstory, current scenes, deleted scenes–and staple together the pages of each scene, cutting the page with scissors if necessary to separate them. After that…I don’t know. We’ll see. I hesitate to tell you exactly what I do, because I don’t want to perpetuate that “rules” mentality. Art doesn’t follow rules.

A Gift

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I’d just gotten in from grocery shopping (that’s why I look so good), and guess what I found on my doorstep! This is the package I’ve been waiting for: the book that Marta made for me. It’s a gift which combines all my loves–art, fiction, and hand-crafted…ness. The book is The Labyrinth House, one I gave a critique a few months (a year?) back, so it has sentimental value, not to mention I’ve been wanting to get my hands on some of Marta’s art, and now I have it. Here’s a link to her art page, Words Are Art. Go browse…buy something. One of these days it will be worth ten times what you paid, mark my words.

My 10-year-old daughter loves to look at Marta’s pictures, so she is thrilled with the book, even though the story is too old for her. I need to put it under glass so she won’t smudge it with all her touching. I’ll do that after I read it again.

Looking at my gift, I see inspiration, anticipation, friendship, and beauty. It touches me so deeply that I’m not sure I can even see all the ways it touches me.

I’ll stop gushing now. I just wanted you to see it.

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Let’s see…What’s happened since my last post…

Monday I wasted the afternoon looking for an elusive part for the gas grill.

Little Bubba was home sick yesterday with a sore throat, and he sucked down cup after cup of warm water with honey. I got some editing done while he played his PS2 Avatar game, but mostly I gave in to my own blahs and just played Farmville and Farkle on Facebook between household chores. Oh yeah, also did my cards and had a powerful reading regarding my writing in the near future.

Did you ever have an argument with your spouse and in the middle of it you become bewildered because you can’t remember who got mad first or why? But it’s too late because it got personal almost immediately, and now you’re mad about those things, and it doesn’t matter at all why it started? Yeah. Had one of those yesterday. I’m still not sure what happened there.

Realized this morning I hate puppies. I’ve never liked puppies, except in that I like dogs and puppies are young dogs. But, you know, you’re supposed to like puppies. Because they’re cute. But they are also crazy and hard to control, and they shit everywhere, and knock down the children, and chew stuff, and I just don’t have the energy or time to make a puppy into a decently trained grown dog. Kittens, on the other hand, are delightful and perfect and angelic. They poop where they’re supposed to from birth, require very little training, and their play is the cutest thing in the world rather than crazy and destructive. The downside to having kittens is shedding (so do dogs) and clawing furniture (but their tiny claws don’t do much damage at first, and you can work on that while they’re still small, unlike dogs who have the power to destroy everything the moment they start eating solid food). So in the young pet department, I vote kittens. If we adopt another dog, it will be a very old and sedate one. Right now we have a gerbil, and that’s just fine with me.

I see Ted Kennedy died. And apparently that’s the only thing that happened in the world overnight.

That’s about it, I guess. Oh, and I’m waiting for a special package to arrive in the mail. I’ll tell you all about it when it gets here. *winks at Marta*

I’ll get up any time now…here I go…

Having a hard time getting started this morning, due to a bit of a fragrance hangover from my outing yesterday. I went to OKC to see The Time Traveler’s Wife with a friend, and while I was there I did a tarot reading for her. The movie was good, the reading I’m not sure about. I’m very rusty doing readings in front of a live querant, because I haven’t had a real-life hang-out buddy in a long time. Years, even. It’s kind of weird, hanging out with somebody just for the fun of it, with no obligation attached. I guess that may make me seem like a real loser, but I’m sure we’ve all gone through periods of time where we put ourselves last, and that’s just what happened with me. I’ve never been one to collect friends like knick-knacks, and when you add in family obligations, moving around a lot and fatigue from health problems, it’s easy to lose touch with people. I’m happy I have the energy now to direct toward new friendships.

I finished my long synopsis for reals on Friday and sent it off to my agent. Thanks to all my beta readers, I’m extremely happy with how it turned out, which in case you didn’t know is pretty rare for me. I think the synopsis is tight and readable and, most importantly, informative–I just can’t imagine how it might have turned out better.

So now I’ll switch over to another project on the merry-go-round, which is editing these short stories from Eternal Press. One is almost finished, so my mini-goal for the next few days is to finish that one and get a good start on the next one. Then I plan to get the notes for my novel in order and work on that till I get stuck, and after that devote a day or two to a friend’s critique, then finish the second Eternal Press story. This merry-go-round method is really working for me. Instead of thinking about how many things I have to get done and becoming overwhelmed (and possibly frozen), I can focus on one thing at a time. Although I have the same amount of work to do, it’s more maneagable in smaller chunks. Duh.

Happy Monday, people!