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	<title>Comments on: Finally the wheels turn again</title>
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	<description>The pursuit of exuberant imperfection</description>
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		<title>By: Sherri</title>
		<link>http://sherricornelius.com/2009/02/09/finally-the-wheels-turn-again/comment-page-1/#comment-2123</link>
		<dc:creator>Sherri</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Feb 2009 14:36:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Barbra, you make it sound so simple. You just mentinoned the hardest part about writing a bio: figuring out what are your best and most relevant features! I guess that&#039;s why people go into your profession, because most people have a hard time assessing their own qualities.

Thanks for commenting.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Barbra, you make it sound so simple. You just mentinoned the hardest part about writing a bio: figuring out what are your best and most relevant features! I guess that’s why people go into your profession, because most people have a hard time assessing their own qualities.</p>
<p>Thanks for commenting.</p>
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		<title>By: Barbra Sundquist, Bio Writer</title>
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		<dc:creator>Barbra Sundquist, Bio Writer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Feb 2009 08:57:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You make a good point about the need to write a professional bio.  I think for most people the hardest part of writing a professional bio is choosing what to put in and what to leave out.  One of the things I tell people is to remember that a bio is a little advertisement for you.  So think about who will be reading your bio and what you want them to know about you.  Then advertise your best and most relevant features!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You make a good point about the need to write a professional bio.  I think for most people the hardest part of writing a professional bio is choosing what to put in and what to leave out.  One of the things I tell people is to remember that a bio is a little advertisement for you.  So think about who will be reading your bio and what you want them to know about you.  Then advertise your best and most relevant features!</p>
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		<title>By: Sherri Cornelius</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sherri Cornelius</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 10 Feb 2009 13:56:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, everybody! Of course I&#039;ll let you know when I find out one way or the other. Here&#039;s a warm welcome to Jennifer. :) And Sarah, hooray for movement!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, everybody! Of course I’ll let you know when I find out one way or the other. Here’s a warm welcome to Jennifer. :) And Sarah, hooray for movement!</p>
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		<title>By: DarcsFalcon</title>
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		<dc:creator>DarcsFalcon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 10 Feb 2009 04:21:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A request for a full is awesome news for a writer!  I am so excited for you!  :D</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A request for a full is awesome news for a writer!  I am so excited for you!  :D</p>
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		<title>By: Sarah</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sarah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Feb 2009 23:45:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Congrats! I coudl relate to this: &quot;It’s not an offer, but it’s more activity than I’ve had in a long, long time.&quot;

I &quot;zipped&quot; off a query letter to an agent two weeks ago on a whim, and was asked for the full ms within two hours. This tells me only that I know how to write an enticing query letter (I&#039;ve already had two requests for fulls but no takers) but still- it&#039;s fun to have some movement on the horizon. And then I also get to try and put it out of mind while I write the next one!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Congrats! I coudl relate to this: “It’s not an offer, but it’s more activity than I’ve had in a long, long time.”</p>
<p>I “zipped” off a query letter to an agent two weeks ago on a whim, and was asked for the full ms within two hours. This tells me only that I know how to write an enticing query letter (I’ve already had two requests for fulls but no takers) but still– it’s fun to have some movement on the horizon. And then I also get to try and put it out of mind while I write the next one!</p>
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		<title>By: Jennifer Nobile</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jennifer Nobile</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Feb 2009 22:33:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi - thanks so much for stopping by my blog and for your insights.  I&#039;ll be following your blog for sure! Congrats on the call about your book - I hope it works out for you!
Jenn</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi — thanks so much for stopping by my blog and for your insights.  I’ll be following your blog for sure! Congrats on the call about your book — I hope it works out for you!<br />
Jenn</p>
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		<title>By: DarcKnyt</title>
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		<dc:creator>DarcKnyt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Feb 2009 18:17:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Again, congrats on the request for a full.  That&#039;s awesome and exciting!  :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Again, congrats on the request for a full.  That’s awesome and exciting!  :)</p>
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		<title>By: Ian</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ian</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Feb 2009 17:30:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well, I still have a hundred pages of early draft garbage to clean up in The Archmage before I can actually finish it. I won&#039;t get through all of it tonight, but I&#039;ll try to make a good-sized dent in it. Other than that, business as usual going on here. Great news on the full request. I hope it turns into a deal for you!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well, I still have a hundred pages of early draft garbage to clean up in The Archmage before I can actually finish it. I won’t get through all of it tonight, but I’ll try to make a good-sized dent in it. Other than that, business as usual going on here. Great news on the full request. I hope it turns into a deal for you!</p>
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